Naruto 「ナルトネタバレ」 591 Spoilers

2012 June 24

Naruto 591 Spoiler: The last chapter end with flasback of uciha mascare. so what happens next..? find out story on Naruto ナルトネタバレ 第591話 Spoiler at if you would like to discuss the Spoilers or predictions, please leave a comment below.

Naruto 591 Spoiler Summarie

Credit: Mangateers

Naruto 591 Spoiler Summarie

Credit: T
Trans : Geg


五影の方はマダラが消える前に攻撃を仕掛けてきた。水遁が間に合わず綱手がダメージをうける。 百豪の術も切 れた。
同時にマダラの体から魂が抜けたので勝ちを確信した綱手だったが、マダラの魂が体に戻りスサノ オで攻撃され 綱手ピンチ。
ダンが間に合い綱手を操作し危機一髪。二人は再開。ダンが綱手のおでこにチューをし 最期に君 をまもれたん だ・・・穢土転生されたかいも少しは有ったかな・・・と言い消える。

つまり無限のチャクラと死なない体が制御不能で動き出すとの事。(死人側の意思で動けるらしい )

(Not much new information in this summary, except based on T’s summary apparently Madara didn’t Edo Tensei himself, but rather canceled his summoning contract with Kabuto, giving himself free reign over his body.)

Itachi disappears. Sasuke sees him off.
The Edo Tensei shinobi disappear one after the other
Dan is able to move his body of his own will now, so he dissipates Chouza’s barrier and uses his Reika no Jutsu to go to Tsunade.

Madara attacks the Kage before disappearing. Tsunade takes damage and her Byakugou no Jutsu wears off.
At the same time, Madara’s soul leaves his body so Tsunade believes they won, but Madara’s soul returns to his body and he attacks with Susano-o.
Dan arrives in time to control Tsunade and saves her in the nick of time. The two are reunited. Dan kisses her on the forehead and says “I was able to save you in the end… I guess being brought back by Edo Tensei isn’t all bad…” and disappears.
Tsunade gets some chakra from him(not sure about this) and her vitality is restored.

Madara’s soul returns because as long as he knows the seals for Edo Tensei, the dead person who was revived can cancel the contract.
In other words, he can move in in undying body with infinite chakra with no restraints.

Naruto Trivia: In the earlier stages of the series, Kakashi stated that there are rumours the Uchiha clan’s Sharingan was derived from the Hyūga clan’s Byakugan.

880 Responses to “Naruto 「ナルトネタバレ」 591 Spoilers”

  1. Uchiha Shisui - June 29, 2012 at 2:10 am #

    new page mudafuka

  2. Uchiha Shisui - June 29, 2012 at 2:11 am #

    dammit im done

  3. Uchiha Shisui - June 29, 2012 at 2:57 am #
  4. Uchiha Shisui - June 29, 2012 at 2:58 am #


  5. eekram - June 29, 2012 at 3:06 am #

    3rd……………. new page

  6. BASH - June 29, 2012 at 3:34 am #

    I’m certain Tobi is Madara’s brother. He has a strong resemblance to Madara, and if he lets his hair grow, it would also be similar to Madara’s hairstyle. So it make sense for him to pose as his brother.

    • ♥PeAcE♥ - June 29, 2012 at 7:14 pm #

      it would be a possibility, but i´m not sure^^
      but it´s more likely than the theorie that says that tobi is madara´s son^^ lol :D

  7. stan - June 29, 2012 at 8:22 am #

    can tobirama break orochimaru edo for him??why he cant break and use his power to defeated oro,and save sarutobi live..I think he is the one who created this jutsu.. What you guys think about this?

    • AvatarShawn9169 - June 29, 2012 at 9:00 am #

      yes but Orochimaru used a seal that locked Tobirama and Harishima’s movements and erased there personallity so they couldn’t act out bc they had no free will and could only use jutsu that orochi ordered them to witch all limits there strength thats why the third was able to kick there asses even though they could beat Madara who is currently raping the gokage so the reason madara can escape is bc of one of 2 things 1) where all the edo’s can move at will he used it as a chance to escape or 2) bc kabuto’s seal doesn’t limit the edos like orochimarus does witch he done to prevent there power from being limited take wat kabuto said to madara at the start of the fight he didn’t know a thing about madaras abilites so eraseing his emotions will and everything wont get him anywhere so kabuto didn’t limit them and therefore lost some of his pieces tot themselves like sasori, asuma, hanzo, itachi, and now madara could u imagine what would happen to orochimaru if he had kabutos seals and his edos escaped and he had to fight 3 hokage lol or better yet if the third didn’t seal them and Kabuto summoned both Madara and Harishima to the feild to fight the Gokage

    • KarakuraNinja - June 29, 2012 at 9:09 am #

      I’m wondering, Hashirama didn’t seem so strong when he was revived… obviously it was before Kishi’s plot twist to make Senjus the strongest. Its funny how Tobirama and Tsunade are the weakest kags and are senjus XD

      Hashirama would be pisse if he found out that Madara raped the gokage single handedly whereas Hashirama got raped by the 3rd who was old physically yet having Orochimaru and Tobirama on his side.

      Kishi are you sure Hashirama is stronger than Madara??
      Even Madara before becoming an edo owned Ohnoki and Muu while taking it easy

      • AvatarShawn9169 - June 29, 2012 at 7:47 pm #

        its fact that madara raped the gokage and he along with his brother and Orochi got beat by one old man but him and his brother was extreamly handicaped in that fight like i said

      • Uchiha Sasuke Vs Uzumaki Naruto - June 29, 2012 at 8:36 pm #


        Orochimaru was in control of Tobirama the whole time – he didn’t have a chance to do anything.Kabuto’s letting Madara fight in his own free will

      • Hm... - June 30, 2012 at 11:00 am #

        But he did have a chance when he made that chat with sarutobi (he and the 1st had their own freewill), but who knows

  8. Dr.Minato - June 29, 2012 at 12:44 pm #

    Chapter 592: A long awaited meeting

    Sasuke: Kabuto you are a konoha shinobi , even though i dont like it
    you are included in my promise , i will let you live for now.

    Sasuke leaves the cave and anko awakes and see his back

    Anko(thinking): how is that possible , why did he defeat kabuto? does he try to help us?

    Anko: Anko Reporting! Uchiha Sasuke stopped Kabuto!

    Headquarters: what? how is that impossible.., contact immediatly the 5 kage!


    Onoki: huh , that brat it seems he is very capable shinobi

    Mei: ahh , i cant believe he is our ally now , i cant wait to meet this handsome uchiha again.

    Tsunade: no matter what sasuke did , we are still in trouble , what are we going to do?

    Madara: did you say uchiha sasuke?

    Madara(thinking): signn *uchiha sasuke* it seems there are survivors of the clan , i want to meet him now

    Madara calls forth a meteor

    Onoki: not again..

    Madara: 5 kage im done playing with you , you are not worth my time , i have more serious bussiness to do

    Madara teleports away

    Mei: it seems we are really dead..

    Raikage: Damn!!

    Tsunade: not yet ! Kuchiyose no jutsu!

    Katsuyu covers the kages

    Panel change to Tobi vs Naruto

    Zetsu: Edo tensei has been released! but there are more bad news for us

    Tobi: What happened?

    Zetsu: Uchiha madara broke free from it and he has full control over his body and now he is chasing after sasuke

    Naruto and coop: What?!

    Tobi: damn it i cant believe it , he will be an obstacle in my plan..

    Tobi: Naruto this is it for today , we will finish this another time , i have something important to do.

    Tobi with gedo and zetsu leave

    Naruto: Tobi is going after sasuke too! , contact everyone quickly we must find sasuke before they do!

    while madara runs through the forest , tobi interrupts him and appears with gedo before him

    Madara: Huh , it seems you are a rikudou now.. are you betraying me?! Kagami!!!

    Tobi/Kagami: Long time no see Sensei , im more powerfull than you ever was , this world belongs to me and not even you will get in my way , prepare to get crushed!

    Next chapter: The ultimate Battle! Perfect Susano vs Gedo mazou!

    • Brandon - June 29, 2012 at 4:11 pm #

      I eh…

      can actually agree on Madara getting beaten by Tobi to be fairly honest… the rest of the prediction wasn’t bad, but didn’t make much sense imho, but the end I actually can see happen…

      That is… if Kishimoto wants to save his manga… if he’s going to let Madara trying to kill all Kages and eventually loses to Naruto somehow, I’m gonna build the most beautiful campfire ever

    • James - June 29, 2012 at 7:56 pm #

      Haha that would make for an epic battle, unless Tobi finishes him in one move -.-

    • ♥PeAcE♥ - July 1, 2012 at 5:22 pm #

      madara vs. tobi would really be an epic battle! :D
      but i hope in the end, that the kage know that itachi was the one who released the edo tensei! :)
      and it would be cool, if tobi would be a former student of madara! :DDD

  9. ManaManaBleach - June 29, 2012 at 6:18 pm #

    does anyone else think that tobi is the one that killed madara?

    • ♥PeAcE♥ - June 29, 2012 at 7:07 pm #

      never thought about that…^^
      but in naruto can everything happen^^ lol

      but i think that tobi and madara worked together somehow^^ :D

  10. Uchiha Shisui - June 29, 2012 at 7:22 pm #

    @kara this is a response to ur first and second being weak. ye i remember say that before about they both got beat up at da same time, but then ppl started saying that orochimarus edo tensei wasnt perfect so dey werent at full power

    • jonas namikaze - June 29, 2012 at 7:29 pm #

      but they still kicked the 3th hokages thats way better compared 2 kabutos edos he failed so much while oro was much better 2 use edo tensei

      • AvatarShawn9169 - June 29, 2012 at 7:44 pm #

        yes its true just look at Hashirama his emotions, will, and everything was sealed so he only could do wat orochimaru wanted and that was wat he knew of witch was that he knew wood style and im sure he had other abilites thatn that we dont know of and bc he lacked emotions, will, etc his strength was decreased i remember his wood style in that fight was on the same level as Yamotos IMO yet now madara is using Hashiramas wood style and kicking ass too and it is way more powerful that it was when it was used by hashirama edoed yet madara cliamed it was still a far cry form the original.

  11. jonas namikaze - June 29, 2012 at 7:22 pm #

    hers the newest trailer for the new naruto movie

    • Uchiha Shisui - June 29, 2012 at 7:31 pm #

      thx jonas,i have a feeling narutos parents will die again. also is that freak at 40 second mark neji?

  12. Uchiha Shisui - June 29, 2012 at 7:23 pm #

    anyone here?

    • ♥PeAcE♥ - June 29, 2012 at 7:28 pm #

      i´m here! :D what´s up? :)

      • Uchiha Shisui - June 29, 2012 at 7:32 pm #

        nm peace watsup with u?

      • ♥PeAcE♥ - June 29, 2012 at 7:37 pm #

        nothing really^^ like always :D
        sitting in my bed, watching tv and chatting with you guys! ;) :D lol

        what time is it where you live, shisui? :D

  13. Uchiha Sasuke Vs Uzumaki Naruto - June 29, 2012 at 8:28 pm #

    I think Tobi is either Izuna,The Sage’s Older Son,or Kagami.I say Kagami cause he is in the story and has a name, (so he must be important) and we have little info on him.

    I’ll be making some theories.

    • ♥PeAcE♥ - June 29, 2012 at 8:56 pm #

      okay, i´m curios on your theories^^ XD :D

      i think that he is something like zetsu^^ lol
      or at least he put some dna from zetsu into himself like kabuto did with orochimaru´s dna^^

      • Uchiha Sasuke vs Uzumaki Naruto - June 29, 2012 at 9:41 pm #

        Indeed,my theory is going to be more like a story so i’m going to do some research to gain some facts on Naruto and how to tell a story.I have my first theory mostly complete,i just need to find the perfect way to tell it.

      • jonas namikaze - June 29, 2012 at 9:44 pm #

        sounds cool when will you write it and is it not hard 2 been on haitus

      • Uchiha Sasuke vs Uzumaki Naruto - June 29, 2012 at 9:46 pm #

        I’ll probably post it sometime next week,and the haitus isn’t hard once you get used to it.It’s not like i don’t anything that’s been going on considering how i’m always here,so that makes things easier aswell.

      • ♥PeAcE♥ - June 29, 2012 at 9:51 pm #

        i´m looking forward for your theorie, uchiha!
        i have high expections in it, so i hope you won´t disappoint me^^ :D XD ;)

      • Uchiha Sasuke vs Uzumaki Naruto - June 29, 2012 at 9:54 pm #

        Ofocourse i won’t – since when deos an elite uchiha dissapiont?

        Mines is Original something that noone has heard anywhere.

      • jonas namikaze - June 29, 2012 at 9:56 pm #

        i agree peACE you will not be dissapointet hes really good with theorys and they is really detailed

      • Uchiha Sasuke vs Uzumaki Naruto - June 29, 2012 at 9:57 pm #

        Thanks for the compliment – i’m heading off now.

      • jonas namikaze - June 29, 2012 at 9:58 pm #

        okay see ya lokking forward 2 your theory

      • ♥PeAcE♥ - June 29, 2012 at 10:00 pm #

        bye uchiha! see you! :D

  14. jonas namikaze - June 29, 2012 at 8:36 pm #

    uchiha how can you be so optimistic im not bitching but dont you agree about this arc not being the best arc in the series it clerly has its flaws like the skipped fights trolled fights no char development etc

    • Uchiha Sasuke Vs Uzumaki Naruto - June 29, 2012 at 8:40 pm #

      Yes it has it’s problems and could of been a hell of alot better so far.I’m optimistic naturally – i don’t complain about things even when it’s not going the way i like,and i know of the many great possibilites this story has.

      Not hating on characters helps aswell,when you don’t complain and think negatively things aren’t as “bad” as they were when you were complaining.even when things aren’t going the way you like you should still try to enjoy the story instead of focusing on the negatives.

      • ♥PeAcE♥ - June 29, 2012 at 8:59 pm #


        UCHIHA IS RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

      • Uchiha Sasuke vs Uzumaki Naruto - June 29, 2012 at 9:39 pm #

        Ofcourse it’s about time someone recognizes.

      • KarakuraNinja - June 30, 2012 at 12:44 am #

        thats kinda true, but I think Jonas is aware of the good points, we were discussing it the other week like when he was rereading the arc and appreciated the early fights more

  15. jonas namikaze - June 29, 2012 at 8:57 pm #

    someont that will talk naruto

    • ♥PeAcE♥ - June 29, 2012 at 9:04 pm #

      i will^^
      suggest a topic! :D XD

      • jonas namikaze - June 29, 2012 at 9:09 pm #

        okay how could madara know the hand seals 2 the edo tensei could it be that hes also a sensor so he could sense the seals itachi maked kabuto use

      • ♥PeAcE♥ - June 29, 2012 at 9:14 pm #

        good topic jonas! :D

        but i doubt that^^
        it was the second hokage who invented that jutsu, and he and madara lived at the same time, maybe the second told it madara or something like that…
        or maybe it was orochimaru who told tobi the seals, after all he worded for akatsuki or zetsu spyed on orochimaru and tobi and madara are somehow connected or madara was alive when orochimaru was in akatsuki^^

      • jonas namikaze - June 29, 2012 at 9:20 pm #

        ignore my comment it was not good imo cuz if madara sensed the seals right after itachi used them he would not had been so calm the entire time and no offense but why shoud tobirama tell madara the seals 2 the edo tensei if they is enemies and i doubt madara has fought him if he had tobi would probably had talked about it and madara and tobi has probably found the secrets about the seals thought research

      • ♥PeAcE♥ - June 29, 2012 at 9:28 pm #

        yeah, you have a point!
        when it comes to experimentes tobi seems just like orochimaru… after all he implanted sasuke itachi´s eyes and put nagato´s eye into himself^^
        and do you remember that room with the hundreds of sharingans? i think he maybe needs them for his eye of the moon plan^^ XD
        somehow i have the feeling that madara waited for this moment where he can free himself of the edo tensei…
        but i think that tobi´s identity is the key to everything…^^

      • jonas namikaze - June 29, 2012 at 9:33 pm #


      • jonas namikaze - June 29, 2012 at 9:37 pm #

        do you have a topic

      • ♥PeAcE♥ - June 29, 2012 at 9:45 pm #


        not really……………..

        do you think orochimaru will appear again?
        we haven´t really seen a flashback from him before he was seald away…?
        only the flashback of the 3rd hokage…

        and do you think that someone dies in the next chapters?
        who would it be?

        and – okay, that is not really important – but today i wondered myself, where does deidara gets his clay from? that white stuff? maybe zetsu is made of this stuff^^ lol but i don´t think that he really is^^ lol

        sorry, right now i can´t think of a better topic! XD :D

      • Uchiha Sasuke vs Uzumaki Naruto - June 29, 2012 at 9:47 pm #

        Deidara uses explosive clay and zetsu is made up from Hashirama’s cells (and probably Madara’s) – two completely different things.

      • jonas namikaze - June 29, 2012 at 9:50 pm #

        his hands has mouths and can make explosive clay cuz its a kinjutsu he used and stollen from iwagakure

      • ♥PeAcE♥ - June 29, 2012 at 9:56 pm #

        @ uchiha: yeah, i know^^ was just kidding anyway^^ lol

        @ jonas: sorry, you are right^^ oh man… it was ages when i last watched the first episodes from shippuuden, but they started from the beginning on animax and i was just wondering^^ lol

      • ♥PeAcE♥ - June 29, 2012 at 9:58 pm #

        i´m not good in suggesting topics^^ lol

        uchiha, do you know a topic?
        or does jonas knows another one? :D XD

      • jonas namikaze - June 29, 2012 at 10:02 pm #

        i have something what do you think is the most epic moments in naruto

      • ♥PeAcE♥ - June 29, 2012 at 10:11 pm #

        there were a lot of epic moments in naruto! XD :D

        – when gaara died and chiyo revived him and the people of his village were around him and welcomed him back!
        – when itachi died with his smile on his lips!
        – when konan died and that paper covered her photo in that house! :D
        – when itachi killed his parents and he cried!
        – when hinata told naruto that she is in love with him and got nearly killed by pain!
        – when pain destroyed konoha and said: now this world shall know pain^^ XD
        – gaara´s speach! :D
        – when gaara talked to naruto about sasuke and what true friedship means^^

        naruto has got a lot of epic moments imo! :D
        and what about you??? :D

      • jonas namikaze - June 29, 2012 at 10:25 pm #

        as you said theres alot of good moments like

        when naruto used the kyuubis chakra for the first time
        sasuke vs oro in the forest of death
        lee vs garra
        oro vs the 3th hokage
        naruto using reasengan for the first time
        the wohle retirval sasuke arc was epicness
        oh i forgot naruto vs garra
        guy using the 6th gate
        sakura vs sasori
        naruto vs oro
        asumas last words
        jirayas death
        itachis backstory and his last words 2 sasuke it wasone of the best moments of the wohle series and ofcourse all the fights in the arc
        naruto meet his dad
        nagatos backsory
        sasuke vs danzo
        naruto vs the kyuubi naruto meet his mom the flashback

      • ♥PeAcE♥ - June 29, 2012 at 10:37 pm #

        you are sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo right! :D
        i nearly forgot about them! :DDD
        there were really soooooooooooooooooooooooo many epic moments! all in all it´s a really great manga! and a epic one too! ;)
        sure there are some parts which could be better, but all in all the manga was and is really great! i enjoyed reading it! many people are always complaining about the new chapter, but if you look back there were sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo many good fights, moments and epic speaches! :D

        ps: don´t forget the naruto vs. sasuke fight in the old naruto episodes, before sasuke joins orochimaru! ;) :D
        (okay, you said sasuke retrival arc, but this fight should be extra mentioned ! ;D)

      • jonas namikaze - June 29, 2012 at 10:54 pm #

        i probably has forgot more like kakashi vs kakuzu and madara showing up and pwn garras division and naruto beating the crap out of the tail beasts there might be more but i cant think of more right now

      • kenpachi - June 30, 2012 at 1:01 am #

        most epic moment goes for the most epic caracter that is Madara

  16. kenpachi - June 30, 2012 at 12:38 am #

    O_o im admitting that i was wrong that Madara was a goner ok…..but i realy dont give a shit about that couse he’s back hahaahah that’s a relief xD

    hope he stays a long time in the story couse i mean the caracter is epicly made and deserves epic ending

    • KarakuraNinja - June 30, 2012 at 12:42 am #

      he will kill everyone… and no one can stop him

      • kenpachi - June 30, 2012 at 12:56 am #

        ya it’s actualy true i mean who’s gonna stop him? i have no idea i can’t think of any1 who s alive that could beat him.

      • Uchiha Sasuke Vs Uzumaki Naruto - June 30, 2012 at 9:15 pm #


      • jonas namikaze - June 30, 2012 at 9:16 pm #

        i really hope 2 see more of zetsu we has barely seen him in this arc

      • Uchiha Sasuke Vs Uzumaki Naruto - June 30, 2012 at 9:18 pm #

        ofcourse we are – once things step up with Naruto vs tobi we’ll get more details on Zetsu.

      • jonas namikaze - June 30, 2012 at 9:21 pm #

        i hope the black zetsu is pretty powerfull since he was able 2 fight the mizukage chojirou minatos gaurds and a kyuubi clone naruto a whole day 2 bad we not got 2 see the fight

      • Uchiha Sasuke Vs Uzumaki Naruto - June 30, 2012 at 9:25 pm #

        Yeah he knows Wood Element too.

      • jonas namikaze - June 30, 2012 at 9:26 pm #

        why do you think kishi is rushing this arc so much

      • Uchiha Sasuke Vs Uzumaki Naruto - June 30, 2012 at 9:28 pm #

        With everything that’s going on this Arc would have been very long,i can easily say that based on what’s happened so far and what i’m thinking is going to happen – but i’m sure there’s tons of stuff that we don’t know about that’s going to happen aswell.

      • jonas namikaze - June 30, 2012 at 9:31 pm #

        but he ruined the chance 2 see damn epic fights

      • KarakuraNinja - June 30, 2012 at 9:43 pm #

        Again… Kishi should’ve extended the arc by 10% to make some epic fights better and onscreened (like swordsman and Hyuuga battles)

  17. kenpachi - June 30, 2012 at 1:13 am #

    ya now 99% want’s to know who tobi is what i wanne know is who the fok is Zetsu? does any1 has info on him? i can’t find anywhere who or what the hell he is helpppppp O_o

  18. Fan(luro) - June 30, 2012 at 3:15 am #

    I Knew that fu***r was not going anuwhere!

    Im telling You guys If kishi Is Saving sasuke the only way How to Is If he helps the kages against madara

  19. looney tunes - June 30, 2012 at 5:05 am #

    Where is black zetsu?

    • Gokage - June 30, 2012 at 4:50 pm #

      dead? mizukage’s assistant (choujuro? [forgot the spelling]) killed/slashed black zetsu for good

    • Uchiha Sasuke Vs Uzumaki Naruto - June 30, 2012 at 9:16 pm #

      He got owned by Choujuro before the 5 Kages all got to where Madara was.

  20. jonas namikaze - June 30, 2012 at 9:01 am #

    im so glad that i decided 2 reread the war arc its much when i read it the first time

    • jonas namikaze - June 30, 2012 at 9:02 am #

      its so much better when i read it now than the 1th time

      • Uchiha Sasuke Vs Uzumaki Naruto - June 30, 2012 at 9:16 pm #

        Exactly – you can appreciate the story more when your reading more than 1 chapter at once.

      • KarakuraNinja - June 30, 2012 at 11:28 pm #

        that is absolutely true Uchiha but in your case it won’t be 100% effective because you’ve been exposed to 20+ chapters worth of spoilers which will damage the appreciation you will have

  21. Hm... - June 30, 2012 at 11:05 am #

    Theory of how Madara released himself.
    Tobi did the basic things, as we know that some chapters before he was curious about the edo tensei jutsu, requirements and hand seals. Mby he could connect to Madara somehow, both knows a variation of jutsu maybe there is a communication jutsu, plus they both have rinnegan. Another theory instead of getting stuck of how Maddara by himself did the job

  22. Dr.Minato - June 30, 2012 at 1:57 pm #

    Naruto 592: Swan Song

    The panel shows Madara looking at the Kages.

    Madara as he takes a menacing pose, and starts making handsings: Tell the one who summoned it, that he shouldn’t carelessly use forbidden jutsu! Release!
    Madara streams from his body dense waves of pure energy, as his connection with Kabuto was severed.*
    Madara: I waited for this moment. I was aware, that a man who summons so many warriors on the battlefield, will fall, sooner or later. And all that i needed was moment in order to escape.
    Tsunade immediatly jumps next to the Kages and she slowly starts giving them chakra.
    Madara smiles.
    Madara: Tsunade Senju. You have the ” Will of the fire” that Hashirama mentioned so many times before. But you lack something. His power. And that’s your flaw.
    Instantly a branch rises from the ground and hits Tsunade. The hit sent the Hokage several meters away. She barely gets up.
    Instantly several other branches are hitting all the Kages. They are all barely standing on their feets.
    The scene it’s focused on Onooki’s eyes. First he looks at Tsunade. He sees a defeated woman, but one that it’s not willing to surrender. He looks at the Mizukage and he spots the fear in her eyes. She tries to keep up, but Madara is too much and she realised this. He looks at the Raikage and sees something simmilar. He knows that Madara is too much, but he is ready to give his life if he can take out the Uchiha. And finally, Onooki’s eyes are focused on the Kazekage, Gaara…he looks at something entirely different. Gaara’s posture, and most importantly his eyes, are saying: ” You’re not going to win bastard!” . He is the only one that remained determined, and the only one that still belives in succes.*
    Onooki thinking: This kid…he is more determined than we are, the old, experienced ones…i cannot allow Madara to kill the next generation…
    Onooki sighs and goes near the Kages.
    Onooki: Mizukage…Hokage…Raikage…Kazekage.. .i want all of you to listen carefully to me. Mei, you’re going to create mist around us. That way, we will make things harder for the Sharingan. Raikage, you will be the first decoy. Tsunade, you will be the second decoy. I will be the real deal, but i will pose as a decoy too. Gaara will attack last. Madara will mistake Gaara for being our ace. He will concentrate on that and not on me.
    Tsunade: But why shouldn’t i be the last?!?*
    Raikage: Or me!
    Onooki: Because, fools…you cannot protect yourselves against Madara. The Kazekage has his sand, that will aid him. Got it now? You will wait for my mark, to attack Madara, Kazekage. You will also cover yourself in your Absolute defence. The other Kages will go several meters away to avoid being caught by the blast.
    All of them: Got it!
    The Mizukage starts making handsings: Hidden mist jutsu!
    Instantly, a dense mist covers the entire area.
    Madara thinking: They are preparing an assault.*
    Just when he was thinking about that, the Raikage appears in front of *Madara, and tries to deliver a decisive punch. A moment later, Tsunade also appears behind Madara, prepared to strike him with a powerful kick. Madara notices that Tsunade is closer, he grabs her leg, uses as a ledge and jumps above her. While being in the air he quickly makes a couple of handsigns.
    Madara: Fire release! Torch of the demons!
    A powerful fire blast goes straight towards the two Kages, leaving them no time to react. Suddenly a giant earth appears in front of them, protecting Tsunade and E from the fire. Almost immediatly, Onooki emerges from the ground and makes a couple of handsigns, as he dashes towards Madara.
    Madara thinking: The Hokage and the Raikage attacked already. The Mizukage was likely tasked only to cast the mist. It means that you are going with the decoys.*
    Onooki: Earth release! Spear of doom!
    As he is dashing towards Madara, Onooki creates a thin earth spear, that he intends to impale Madara with. The Uchiha, simply dodges the spear, catches Onooki by his throat and slams him into the ground.
    Madara: You have failed old man.*
    Onooki: Failed? I haven’t failed anything, Madara. I am a crippled old man, and as you saw, i managed to hold my own against someone like you.
    Madara: Hmpf. And you’re proud of that? Even if you were in your prime, you *couldn’t have beat me.
    Onooki smiles: I wouldn’t be so sure.
    Madara: The ninja world has fallen, Onooki. And you will also die. You should have remained home. – now Madara has come very close to Onooki.
    Onooki smiles and shouts: Now Gaara!
    Instantly several pillars of sand emerge from the ground with the intention of stabbing Madara. But unfortunately, the Uchiha saw right through the attack, and dodges all of them in a second. The next moment, Gaara apears right next to him, trying to get a clear shot. Madara turns around, catches Gaara’s punch, and kicks the Kazekage away. As he is slowly walking towards Gaara in order to kill him, an earth platform appears below Gaara and takes him away. Onooki’s voice is heard.
    Onooki with a menacing voice: You should never turn your back to the enemy!!!!
    Madara turns around furious, just to see Onooki how he creates a conic Dust Release.
    Onooki shouts: Dust release!!! Particle cataclism!!!
    The scene gets blurry as Onooki releases the jutsu. One panel is focused on Onooki’s determined eyes, one It’s focused on Madara’s shocked face.
    Onooki thinking: I was a stubborn old man..for too long…i lost sight of myself, i thought that the world was drawn as i saw it. I never realised that times are changing, and that i’m a fossil of the war times. I never realised that my philosophy was bad for the Iwa. That after the wars ceased, we should have tried a peaceful approach…we, the five Kages are a bunch of fools…we think that we lead a village, but, instead, the village leads us. But now i realised…that times are changing. That the new generation will surpass this one…that these kids are more powerful and wiser than us…hmpf…old fool…
    Madara stops Onooki’s thinking by shouting: You think you can kill me?!? Me?!?
    Onooki with an angered voice: You are not the superior being that you claim to be! Otherwise you wouldn’t be dead!!!*
    The scene shows one last frame of Madara before being destroyed by the jutsu.
    Madara smiling: Hmpf…you’ve truly have grown, brat…i guess that this is the end for me…as far as i am concerned…this is over…congratulations, Onoki. You managed to kill the most powerful ninja that ever existed…farewell…world…
    In that moment the dust release jutsu, explodes. A giant blast is seen, as smoke and dust are rising from the ground. The four Kages are pushed back by the blast.
    As the dust clears up the panel shows only Onooki lying on the ground, barely concious.
    Immediatly Gaara and the Kages land near him. Gaara rushes at the old man and grabs him.
    Gaara: Tsuchikage! How do you feel?!?
    Onooki: Like dying.
    Tsunade kneels near them and starts healing the Tsuchikage, but almost immediatly she takes her hands away and starts crying.
    Raikage: What happend?!?
    Tsunade crying: I’m sorry Onoki…i can’t…
    Onoki smiles: I know. I’m beyond healing at this point.
    Gaara shocked: What do you mean?!?
    Onoki: That jutsu, that i used…it takes out even an Edo Golem. I killed Madara by obliterating every cell in his body. Not even the ressurection abilites of the Edo Tensei can bring back someone from such attack. He is forever gone. But there a risk for the user. Rather a price to pay than a risk. His own life. That’s how my master died. And this is how i will die.
    Mei and Tsunade are crying. The Raikage has a sad expression and Gaara a mixture between shock, sadness, and anger.
    Onoki: Don’t worry about me. It was my choice. I felt like i had to do something. Just…Make sure that nobody summons me with that damn jutsu.*
    Gaara: We could have sealed him!!
    Onooki: No we couldn’t. He was way to powerful for us to handle him. It was a necessary sacrifice.
    Raikage: Tsuchikage…have you…
    Onoki: No…i didn’t…nobody is fit in my village for this job…so…i’m going to do something that was never seen before…
    Gaara looks at him with a confused face.
    Onoki: Kazekage Gaara…promise me that you will love and respect the Iwagakure and it’s citizens. Promise me that you will protect my village with the same passion that you protected the Sunagakure. Promise me that you will be a better Tsuchikage than i was…
    Gaara shocked: What do you mean?!?
    Onoki smiles, and with his last breathe: Promise me Gaara…because…starting now…you’re both Kazekage and Tsuchikage!
    The panel is black for a moment. And the next scene shows only Gaara’s mouth and cheeks. A tear rolls down on his cheek. Only his voice is heard without revealing his eyes.
    Gaara: I promise…

    The end.

    • Gokage - June 30, 2012 at 4:28 pm #

      i think you lack the fact about 2nd tsuchikage
      he didn’t died because of the side effect thing that your talking about. the died because of 2nd mizukage (they killed each other)

      For me (seriously just for me, but i’ll say it anyway)
      Tsunade-hime would do something new
      the fact the she restored her chakra fullest(Dan’s doing) and looked fresh (i mean younger than usual[what i thought]), fresh but messy(dirty face) and she’s a SENJU+UZUMAKI. there’s no way shes that plain powerful kunoichi-kage. what i’m saying is that she should have more power or technique

  23. Rinnegan - June 30, 2012 at 2:45 pm #

    maybe when kabuto / or tobi implented the rinnegan in madara’s dead body he learned the seals as for Nagato / Pain knew many seals that’s because of the Rinnegan of the Sage of the Six paths it will learn you all the seals so that’s why he knew the seals so easily .

  24. Uchiha Shisui - June 30, 2012 at 8:00 pm #

    anyone here?.

  25. Uchiha Shisui - June 30, 2012 at 8:02 pm #

    new page,!,!!